I think that what you published made a bunch of sense. However, think about this, suppose you added a little information? I am not suggesting your information is not solid, but what if you added something to maybe grab folk's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little boring. You could look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create article headlines to grab people interested. You might try adding a video or a related pic or two to grab people excited about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it could bring your posts a little livelier.